Zizka
Member
Hello guys,
So my game is a 'choose your own adventure' game. You read about your current situation and then make choices as to what you want to do next. So there's a lot of reading to be done basically.
Anyhow, I'd like to know if you guys feel like this is too cramped:
There isn't anything on top yet but this is where the player token will be displayed in the game world.
At the moment, I feel like the lines are too short as only about 5 words can fit on one, which means a lot of pages to flip through for the player which I don't think is fun. I've checked a few books around my house and most hold a minimum of around 10 words per sentence.
I'd like to know what you guys think about it before I make some changes (every time I change something I have to spend more money on programming so I want to make as few alterations as possible).
As usual your feedback is valued.
E.
So my game is a 'choose your own adventure' game. You read about your current situation and then make choices as to what you want to do next. So there's a lot of reading to be done basically.
Anyhow, I'd like to know if you guys feel like this is too cramped:
There isn't anything on top yet but this is where the player token will be displayed in the game world.
At the moment, I feel like the lines are too short as only about 5 words can fit on one, which means a lot of pages to flip through for the player which I don't think is fun. I've checked a few books around my house and most hold a minimum of around 10 words per sentence.
I'd like to know what you guys think about it before I make some changes (every time I change something I have to spend more money on programming so I want to make as few alterations as possible).
As usual your feedback is valued.
E.