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So I've been working on In the Mind for about two months now (planning, story, game play, etc.) and I've been wondering if it sounds appealing. Here's the general story for Part 1 - Fear. (Fives Parts by the way, Fear, Scared, Confusion, Sadness, Anger). School is rough, even on my birthday...I always fear someone's watching me...I can't tell who anyone is anymore...I can't even tell apart my own brother...Gotta go, it's lunch time...hope I make it there alive.
Also some of the events of this story are taken from my life so far. I also have a disability that Zack has that makes him have this view on the world. Those 5 emotions have to do with something to. Anyways its sorta a learn as you go and stealth and puzzle. There's also a secret when you find 5 birthday candles, the secret revels part of Zack's disability, which is the same as mine. Anyways I want suggestions on how to make it better or if it looks good so far.
Also some of the events of this story are taken from my life so far. I also have a disability that Zack has that makes him have this view on the world. Those 5 emotions have to do with something to. Anyways its sorta a learn as you go and stealth and puzzle. There's also a secret when you find 5 birthday candles, the secret revels part of Zack's disability, which is the same as mine. Anyways I want suggestions on how to make it better or if it looks good so far.