Graphics Feedback on character.

Discussion in 'Game Design, Development And Publishing' started by Afletch88, Nov 22, 2018.

  1. Afletch88

    Afletch88 Member

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    This is my first time doing any real game art, I've mainly only made flat design characters and such, and a few things. Any opinions on color and such would be great, I'm very open to any feedback.
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    He has like dual lightsaber-esque claws on each his hands. I plan to control the beam and such through player input eventually.
     
  2. Lucia

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    it's nice, but yhe "dual lightsaber-esque claws" are not so "clear". When I see them, I don't undestand what they are. And I'm not so sure about his feet. The beard is amazing
     
  3. Afletch88

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    Yeah, I forgot to mention they're only visible when your in combat, my apologies. The feet I wasn't too sure on myself. And thanks about the beard! :) Here is a somewhat revamped version, I really like. I'm trying to get a flowing cape working but animating it is so rigid.

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  4. Lucia

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    in this one I don't like the "cloat-border". It has no flat style. I also prefer the style beard of the previous (not symmetric and without shadow). Sorry :(
    the feet now are perfect.
     
  5. Afletch88

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    Yeah, with the cloak it's kinda hard to keep it fully flat, because I want the tattering effect, while playing around with looks and such I've decided to make his right arm missing, and I'll have some sort of weapon affixed
    to it, kinda like Ash vs Evil Dead style.

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  6. Lucia

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    replacing the green with the violet (about the shirt) he is more "dark" :)
     
  7. Afletch88

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    Yeah I figured with the hood if he had a brighter color it just wouldn't look right, thanks for all the feedback by the way :)
     
  8. Lucia

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    you're welcome! Good luck with your game :)
     
  9. Niels

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    His legs look a bit long compared to his body, other than that it's pretty cool flat design:) (love flat design!)
     

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